tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1190684645206719279.post3905044004670245763..comments2023-07-29T01:58:55.812-06:00Comments on Goodbye sun, hello Manchester: Teaser Tuesday #4: A Bit About FredLaura McMeekinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03092215300736511578noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1190684645206719279.post-7277293510221122002010-03-24T13:20:07.044-06:002010-03-24T13:20:07.044-06:00This was a great read! I love the dialogue! They s...This was a great read! I love the dialogue! They seem to have a great friendshipKarla Calalanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17414349286625200655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1190684645206719279.post-29221136177783496602010-03-23T22:32:43.921-06:002010-03-23T22:32:43.921-06:00I'm with Fred! Egg=ewwww LOL
Can't wait ...I'm with Fred! Egg=ewwww LOL <br /><br />Can't wait to see what tricks you've come up with for this MS! I love Aeron and Fred's story, and I'm glad you're working on it again. :DAnnie McElfreshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14312634754232333138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1190684645206719279.post-78655258562274193822010-03-23T11:15:49.648-06:002010-03-23T11:15:49.648-06:00I loved the friendly atmosphere and how the charac...I loved the friendly atmosphere and how the characters seemed happy and at ease with each other. Really nice. I wonder what happens next. Someone dies?Glen Akinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647296775230237162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1190684645206719279.post-37507349298699107162010-03-23T11:03:26.970-06:002010-03-23T11:03:26.970-06:00Glad you're teasing and writing again! Liked t...Glad you're teasing and writing again! Liked the relationship between the three characters. And Aeron is coming out really cute too!Katie Ashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11542035499311859866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1190684645206719279.post-83395369738815949692010-03-23T10:55:13.084-06:002010-03-23T10:55:13.084-06:00I really like the byplay between the characters he...I really like the byplay between the characters here. It feels real and not forced. Nicely done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13612218172442721987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1190684645206719279.post-29402683290910363982010-03-23T10:07:00.204-06:002010-03-23T10:07:00.204-06:00It's so great to be reading your writing! I l...It's so great to be reading your writing! I love the relationship they have in this snip, so comfortable!J.S. Woodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09231458559331295121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1190684645206719279.post-54445481571136498532010-03-23T08:03:56.535-06:002010-03-23T08:03:56.535-06:00Loved the voices! Felt like I was right there with...Loved the voices! Felt like I was right there with them. Excellent work!Writing Writerly thingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17184023954656057661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1190684645206719279.post-27264714279504103182010-03-23T07:44:38.072-06:002010-03-23T07:44:38.072-06:00The dialog feels very real and I'm very intrig...The dialog feels very real and I'm very intrigue about the relationships! You need to finish this so I can read it please!Véro Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02437660016137470145noreply@blogger.com